Monday 19 September 2016

Room 5 Glacier Camp



WALT share our camp experiences.
I enjoyed writing it.
The challenging bit was thinking of the part I didn't like on camp.
To make my work better I could use more interesting words.

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  1. Carter20 September 2016 at 12:55

    Hi Brayden you did a great job but for a next step could you try fit a couple more words in two of the boxes.

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  2. Antonia4 November 2016 at 09:44

    Hi Brayden
    I like you put the words in boxes
    Next time you could add more words in the most enjoyed box
    Antonia

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