Thursday, 30 August 2018

paroa school ad

3 comments:

  1. Hi Brayden,

    I liked how you showed what you could do at Paroa School.

    Maybe next time you could put what the video is about.

    From Max

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  2. Hi
    good job with the video but next time make the camera less shaky.
    Jason

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  3. Hey Brayden, Deakyn here from Awahono School. I like how you made a Paroa advert. How long did it take you to make it? Maybe next time you could put more information about Paroa School. Or even make a Paroa advert about the whole place during home time. Come check out my blog I think you might like it. Copy and Paste this link into google: http://awahonodeakynh.blogspot.com/
    P.S: Great Semi Finals game on Saturday. On the 3rd of August. You guys played really well.
    Kind Regards
    Deakyn

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